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 |  Subject: You know, it's a hype. Sun Jun 23, 2013 1:44 pm | |
| The lights dim out in the arena, creating a somewhat eerie feel. The titantron comes to life with a forest. A darkened forest. It would appear to be late at night, a few of the crickets can be heard in the distance but that is not what is to be focused on. There appears to be a figure with long hair in the distance.
A young girl's voice comes over the speakers, eerie, but recognizable.
"London bridge is falling down, falling down, falling down."
The girls begins to slowly turn around, facing the camera.
"London bridge is falling down, my, fair, LADY!"
It starts sweet and slow, but turns into a screech. Suddenly, the camera is sucked into the mouth of the pale, dark girl. Darkness takes over the screen for a few moments. Then, scratches begin to be carved into the darkness. Blood seeps through, ripping through the darkness as though it's wood. Finally, it seeps all the way through, with the girl on the screen again. Staring into the camera very scared. She is breathing kind of heavily. Then she whispers to the camera.
"Hide."
The camera moves suddenly behind a tree as the girl sits in the middle of a clearing, looking at the ground. A dark figure comes walking up behind her. She breaths heavily as the figure walk up to her, grabs her head and pulls it back, looking into her eyes. Then, the girl screams. The camera turns back to blackness suddenly and blood seeps onto it again with a man laughing in the background. The blood turns into words.
"July, you're darkness becomes reality."
The laughter stops and the screen dies out completely.
[Give me a grade. It's short but once again, just a hype.  Promo, closed] |
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| | Subject: Re: You know, it's a hype. Mon Jun 24, 2013 2:35 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: You know, it's a hype. Fri Jun 28, 2013 9:24 am | |
| Completely forgot about this, my bad. You already had a debut promo, so you won't receive the extra point.
Seth Rollins = +2 SP
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Similar to your other Promo, there just wasn't much to it. Obvious knowledge of BBCodes, I just hope your Promos are much longer when you debut onto the Roster this coming Monday. |
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| | Subject: Re: You know, it's a hype. Sat Jun 29, 2013 7:53 am | |
| Not this coming Monday love, it will be happening soon. Just not Monday. Will talk to you sometime soon about this and a few other things on Live. 
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| | Subject: Re: You know, it's a hype. Sat Jun 29, 2013 7:54 am | |
| Oh, and the promos should be a lot longer. |
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