One thing that I do like you, is that you have still tried to make a promo. It's not the worst, but it's also not the best. But then again, this is the first Graves we've had anyway
One thing I would say to improve on is to add a variety of colour onto your promos. It does look very bland, but, it's not the worst thing in the world.
One thing that I would remind you on, is that making the text really large, and adding a picture after every 2 lines of speech isn't really going to make your promo seem a whole lot better. I feel it makes you seem like you aren't trying hard enough to impress us.
I'm just a guy trying to help. As long as you don't respond negatively to the haters, you'll be fine. Hope you get to be accepted by others eventually.
