''Cryback...''-Triple H

color=#ffcc33]Jr : Well, from what we understand he has a match agaisnt Ryback.[/color]
Jr : I Wonder what the game is thinking about? is he here to talk about his win, over Ted dibiase
    on smack down? Or is he gonna talk about his match with Ryback later tonight?

Lawler : Well, i guess were gonna just figure out.

Triple H : Cryback...Cryback...Cryback...Now i know why people call you cryback, because thats exactly what you are!
          You're complaining and crying over management? just because they always put you in a match, with someone better
          than you? Just because they always put you in a match, with some one more talented than you? Is that what gets
          gets you mad big boy? Well, at the end of the night you aren't gonna be pleased with the results of our match.
Lawler : I don't think getting Ryback mad would be a good idea Hunter!
Jr : Its Cryback! Plus the game's just getting into the head of his opponent!
    And hes gonna keep doing it, because hes damn good at it!


c33]Triple H : Because I'm smarter than you ryback I'm more talented than you will ever be! Simply put, im just plain better
          than you! And i don't think i should prove it in the ring but, i'm just gonna anyways, because thats how damn
          good i am! So how does it feel ryback? you're gonna play the game, you're gonna be the next victim on the game's
          list, does that also make you mad? you're gonna lose to some one better than you again. And this time if you
          wana complain to anybody about losing agaisnt me, just come over to my locker room i'll always have a fist full
          of knuckles waiting for you!


Jr : The game is really trying to get ryback mad.

Lawler : i just think its a bad idea.

Jr : If your willing to say that to the cerebral assassin's face, that would be a bad idea Jerry.



Triple H : Ryback your just a fat Rvd wannabe, you should of just stayed as an Rvd fan in the crowd, so we wouldn't have to see your fat a---

Lawler : And here comes ryback

Jr : Wonder whats gonna happen now?





                                  [ Promo Open To Ryback ]

Good stuff. I would recommend using bold print to describe the actions that your character or someone else is doing, that would make things seem less jumpy. Plus, adding titantrons would be a nice touch. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

DieCobros wrote:

Good stuff. I would recommend using bold print to describe the actions that your character or someone else is doing, that would make things seem less jumpy. Plus, adding titantrons would be a nice touch. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

Thanks for the feedback man, and yeah i'll try that in the next promo. Im plaining on making a couple more promos this week.