Subject: 3 probably will not be enough Mon Mar 03, 2014 3:43 am
The camera pans back in after a commercial break showing everyone there favorite commentary duo set to continue the broadcast.
Jim Ross
The crowd continues to be electric here tonight , they have been kept on the edge of thier seats all night with all this great action and folks were not even done here yet still tonight we have a fantastic main event , we'll see bull ray in action hot off the heels of the ppv , we'll see our newly crowned U.S. and World Heavywieght champion , we're stacked here tonight King
Da King
You're absolutely correct JR its a huge RAW we got going on tonight , I dont know if my awful clogged heart can handle it JR !
Jim Ross
Thats probably true King , you just keep eatting all that fried chicken even tho the docters told you to stop but you just keep on doing it any ways dont you ...
Just then the arena lights cut off and the low rumble of some sort of beat can be heard in the arena the crowd is anxious and the commentators cut the chatter waiting to see for themselfs what or who it could be. Then suddenly the lights cut back on and the music blares threw the arena
Langston begins a slow decent onto the stage. His form is massive and intimedating standing alone under the titantron and the crowd watches his ever move with baited breath and a mixed reaction. Langston slowly brings his hands together and begins grinding his palms together. He dosnt smile as he looks out over the audiance he just nods his head up and down as he peersa aound as if to say I have arrived. he tilts his head both to the left and the right quickly as tho to crack his neck and then begins jumping up and down slightly. This goes on for a few moment the entire time Big E looking like a caged animal then he begins to roar.
As he lets out the primal roar a thick cloud of chalk emerges as Langston slams his hands together. He thrashes about a bit and steps threw the cloud back into sight his face is calm again but his breathing is heavy and all signs point to a man who is fired up. Langston heads down the ramp slowly seldom breaking eye contact from the ring. As he lumber some fans stick there hands out at the returning langston hopeing to get some sort of reaction but Big E acts as if he is alone in the arena now.
Jim Ross
MY GOD KING ITS LANGSTON AND HES BACK !!! THAT BIG ANGRY SON OF A BITCH IS BACK !!! ..... we havent seen langston in months and he is re- emerging right here tonight on RAW.
Langston makes his way up the steps and onto the side of the apron when he finally turns and acknoleges the fans again as he beats on his chest and lets out yet another loud primal yell.
Langston gets himself i mic and gets dead center of the ring and speaks
Big E Langston
Ima make this real simple , real short and real sweet. Big E Langston is not a man of words he a man of action so i got somebody to come in here and do the talking for me while i adminster the beat downs. I think your gunna know this guy when you see him just wait a second we got this.
Langston waves at the crowd by the announce table and a few confused faces pop their heads around trying to see who Langston was talking about but the answer isn't left to question, In fact its answered almost immediatly as a fat little man in a suit steps over the barricade wall and begins walking toward the ring. The crowd is in shock and so are the announcers
Jim Ross
It's that slimy grease ball Paul Hey man KIng ! What in the world is he doing here with Langston tonight ?
Da King
HA HA it looks like Langston went out and caught himself a walrus JR !
Jim Ross
Heyman is a dangerous man , and he is not to be taken lightly if Langston and Paul Heyman are working together now there is no telling what path of destruction they are going to leave behind them i dont like this KIng not on bit
Hey man enters the ring and walks up to Langston who smiles and nods as he hands the mic to Heyman who , as always , looks raring and ready to go.
Paul Heyman
Well , well , well well well . Ladies and gentalman here in this building tonight i am very very excited to tell you that after my brief absence from the WCF i have went a head and found myself a new friend. Ladies and Gentalman the physical specimen that you see besides me isnt just a man. No , not just a man at all he is more of beast. Big E Langston has more lion in him then he dose human. Over 300 pounds of pure ruthless agression , speed , and cunning. Ladies and Gentelman this Beast is the total package and I have to tell you when he approached me this weekend and said " Hey Paulee im going back and i think you can take me to that next level ". Well i felt like a kid on christman quite frankly. It's not everyday that the next huge star of the sports entertainment world walks into your office and offers you a paycheck to stand by him . And its not everyday that that man finds the greatest stratigical mind in the business today ... that being me of course . And further more it is far from any day that those to man come to an agreement and form what could only become the biggest power duo this or any company has ever seen before.I understand that you may have alot of questions as too how this all works but i can assure you its quite simple. All you need to know is that i represent Mr. Langston now , thus he is .... a Paul Heyman guy ...hahahahaha .
The crowd boooos their disapproval out at both men in the ring but Langston isnt shook. He stands arms folded over his chest unblinking staring dead ahead as Heyman laughs to himself over what they have created. after a few seconds Heyman begins again
Paul Heyman
Ladies and gentalman that is about our time but i wanted to add one more thing before Mr. Langston and i go begin to plot our moves to the top here in Wcf . Big E Langston is here to be a world champion make no doubt about that. and there is no one here in this arena or anyone sitting there at home watching this that cant try to convince him otherwise. Because we are both willing , and i do mean both willing to do , and hurt anyone that gets on our way to The World Heavywieght Championship. I thank you for your time everyone and we look foward to seeing you in the weeks to come . Mr. Langston if you are ready.
After heyman drops the mic on the mat he walks over to the ropes and holds them open for big e as he climbs threw the intense look has yet to leave his eyes. he looks like a man poised to strike but instead begins another slow decent up the ramp heyman right behind him.
( First promo in a while so i would really like some feedback please and thank you =)
TheSwedishAce
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Subject: Re: 3 probably will not be enough Mon Mar 03, 2014 5:08 am
I love the meat of this promo, my only complaint is the spelling and grammar. I always try to run everything I write through Word at least once and if I have enough time, a full re-read to make sure I didn't miss anything. Other than that I liked what I saw, Big E + Heyman should be an interesting duo to read about
DullChameleon
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Subject: Re: 3 probably will not be enough Mon Mar 03, 2014 1:37 pm
