Subject: ................. Mon Jun 24, 2013 1:44 pm
The camera opens up from black to display the locker room in the back of the WWF forum. Screams can be heard coming out from around the corner about the news that Cody Rhodes has just been named intern GM of WCW. The noise is so loud and deafening that an angered Farooq comes out from his locker room. An angered WWF intern comes out from his head office.
Executive: "DOES ANYONE HERE NOT REALIZE THIS IS THE DAMN WWF? THIS ISNT AMATEUR HOUR. THIS ISNT WCW. WE DONT CARE ABOUT WHAT THEY DO OR DO NOT DO. AM I UNDERSTO-"
Before the executive can finish speaking, he is pied in the face from a grinning Hornswaggle. Hornswaggle and the executive run down the hall, leaving Farooq to be the only visible person in the scene. The camera zooms in on his face as he looks deeply into the camera.
[End Promo] [Ready to be graded]
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Subject: Re: ................. Mon Jul 01, 2013 11:28 am
Farooq = +3.5 SP (2.5 for Promo, 1 for Debut)
Feedback: This made me laugh, it really did. Good delivery of the promo, a generous grade, but it did it's job. There's much more you can do with the Farooq character and i'm sure your promos will develop and get more length. Try and find a feud!
