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Subject: Stephanie opens RAW Wed Oct 16, 2013 5:34 am
OOC: Apologies for the quality and lateness of this promo. Things got in the way.
Monday Night Raw kicks off with a huge fireworks display as the live crowd go insane for their favourite show of the week. The commentators can be heard discussing about stuff that no one cares about when all of a sudden the arena falls silent as the Chairwoman of the WCF's music hits.
The Billion Dollar Princess walks out onto the stage dressed in her signature suit followed closely behind by a slithering Paul Heyman, along with his clients, Brock Lesnar and the number one contender, Dolph Ziggler, followed closely behind by Cody Rhodes. The crowd don't seem too thrilled by their appearance and let them know as they fire down jeers at the group who make their way down the ramp to the ring. Dolph Ziggler and Cody Rhodes jump onto the apron as Paul Heyman and Lesnar walk around to the opposite side of the ring. Stephanie McMahon heads towards the steel steps and makes her way to the apron where Ziggler and Rhodes stand. The two waste no time as they hold down the ropes for Stephanie to enter. With a big smile slapped across her face, Stephanie steps into the center of the ring as Heyman enters and hands her a microphone.
Stephanie McMahon When I took over my father's creation, I didn't do it for myself, I did it for my father's legacy, and most of all, I did it for all of you. Jonathan Coachman was running a mockery of this show, it was losing ratings by the second when he was in charge. But now that there is a solid Authority figure, the ratings have never been higher. Yet there's something still missing... There clearly has to be something missing or why else would you continuously heckle the woman who made all of this possible? Now I racked my brains for quite some time trying to come up with a solution to what could possibly be missing from a show that has it all... Well, that is except for a World Champion, but that matter is being addressed, come No Mercy, we will have a clear cut champion... No, it's something else.
The fans appear intrigued as Stephanie looks out at them with a smug look across her face.
Stephanie McMahon There is something that both my father and Jonathan Coachman failed to succeed with during their respective runs as the General Managers of RAW... But now that RAW has a new face, it's time to remedy that, to prove once and for all that I am not someone you should roll your eyes at... So tonight, we are going to have ourselves a huge main event. Six men will stand in this ring and they will compete valiantly for one of the greatest honours in professional wrestling, with the opportunity to become the third and without a doubt, the final Mr. Money in the Bank of 2013.
Stephanie is barely able to finish her sentence as the audience can't contain their excitement.
Stephanie McMahon Where my father and Jonathan have failed, so have Mr. Perfect and John Morrison. Two men who could not handle the pressure that came with holding the coveted briefcase... But I can assure you that won't happen again... I have carefully selected who will be competing for this opportunity tonight, and I'll be damned, if any of them throw this opportunity away like Hennig or Morrison did, there will be severe consequences.... Now in the interest of fairness, I have decided that the four men in the ring with me right now, will not be competing in the ladder match tonight.
Cody and Ziggler look furious as they argue with Stephanie McMahon and Paul Heyman seems irritated as he joins in with the arguing for his clients.
Stephanie McMahon Enough! I will not be bullied into changing my mind, my decision is final! The men competing in this match will be...
Brodus Clay
The fans don't seem too happy with that decision.
ROB VAN DAM!
The mood in the arena lifts as the crowd goes crazy for the inclusion of Rob Van Dam.
The Miz!
As if they thought it couldn't get any better, the crowd are ecstatic as the former European Champion will be competing tonight.
Stone Cold Steve Austin!
Again the crowd go nuts as another big name is announced.
My husband, Triple H!
The screams of joy in the arena can be heard all over as Stephanie doesn't appear too happy with the last name she announced.
And finally... Actually, I think I'll let this man introduce himself...
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..........................
What's that metronome I hear?
”HOLY SHIT” chants flow through the arena as the former World Heavyweight Champions music blasts throughout the arena and Stephanie stands in the middle of the ring, her arms crossed, sporting a huge smirk as she awaits the arrival of the final participant.
Alveuss
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Subject: Re: Stephanie opens RAW Thu Oct 17, 2013 12:54 pm
The "Holy Shit" chants continue throughout the arena as the music begins to pick up a little. The camera cuts back to the ring with everyone staring intently at the stage, Stephanie with a proud look on her face, Cody also with a smirk awaiting his former tag team partner's entrance, the others not knowing what to think. After what seems like an eternity a figure walks out from the back with his head facing the ground.
Jim Ross
Is that him King?! Is he really here?!
Jerry Lawler
I don't know JR, I can't see!
Jim Ross
Good god listen to this place!
As the music really picks up pace the figure steps out further onto the stage, raises his head and shoots his arms into the air to the delight of the fans.
Jim Ross
It is, he's back! Drew is back!
The crowd roar in excitement as the Chosen One does his signature taunt at the top of the ramp taking in all the admiration from his fans, after a moment or two he lowers his arms and begins walking down towards the ring. As Drew walks up the steps and is entering the ring Stephanie raises the mic to introduce him.
Stephanie McMahon
Ladies and Gentlemen, "The Chosen One", Drew McIntyre!
Drew stops just as he's entered the ring and looks around at all the cheering fans and those in the ring around him. Stephanie claps for a moment then reaches out her hand to welcome Drew but is left looking stupid as Drew ignores her completely and walks across the ring to receive a mic. This clearly didn't sit well as the smile disappeared from her face entirely but no one else in the ring seemed to take notice. Drew receives his mic and his music stops but he stops once again to let the crowd have their voices heard. Chants of "Welcome back" are heard before he finally raises the mic to speak.
Drew McIntyre
First of all, for any of those who aren't aware, my name... Is Drew McIntyre.
He lowers the mic as the crowd show their respect to the former WWF champion. Drew looks around the ring at the others in it, Stephanie is half-heartily clapping her hands.
Drew McIntyre
I'd like to thank you Stephanie for this opportunity, I promise you that when I win that briefcase I'll take it more seriously than those before me. Now as all of you know, before I was forced to take time off from injury I was the WWF Champion. The last WWF champion as it were because that very Sunday I left my title and the World Heavyweight title were unified. I take great pride in that, knowing that I was the last person to hold, no matter how short my reign was, your father Stephanie, your father's greatest creation. Now this new title, this "WCF championship"... I understand this was your doing?
Stephanie smiles and raises the mic but is cut off.
Drew McIntyre
Well, you and big Johnny. Coach too, I'm sorry I'm a little behind on things, not quite up to date.
With the smile gone completely from her face she turns to Cody and the others looking a little pissed off and confused.
Drew McIntyre
Wait, again sorry, I'm behind on a few things... Why are you all out here? I mean sure, good to see you again Cody, not so much you guys but still. Why?
Stephanie hands Dolph the mic.
Dolph Ziggler
We are...
Drew McIntyre
Nevermind, I don't care.
Dolph stops with a dumbfounded look on his face before turning to Stephanie complaining.
Drew McIntyre
Dolph please, come on grow a set. I admittedly don't know much of anything that's going on around here anymore but I do know this. You Dolph, are one of two men who will be fighting for the vacant WCF title at No Mercy. The other being CM Punk.
The audience begin cheering once Punk's name is said.
Drew McIntyre
Oh, wait. He's one of the good guys now?
The audience continue cheering.
Drew McIntyre
See, learning new things every minute. Now with that said, Punk being the good guy, plus the fact that you're out here with Stephanie, my former tag partner and big meow meow over here... I'm guessing that makes you the bad guy, am I right?
Drew gets right in Dolph's face as the two have a staredown in the middle of the ring, at the same time as this the crowd have started a yes chant which stops as Drew raises his mic again.
Drew McIntyre
That's alright I never liked you anyway. I would like to say though... I you somehow manage to win at No Mercy, which I personally don't think you will because Punk is much better than you but anyway, if somehow you manage to win... Well, don't get too comfortable. 'Cause I miss being top of the pile, and I'll have a briefcase basically granting me my spot back at the top.
As Drew is still in the face of Dolph, Stephanie has signalled for Cody and Brock to take care of Drew. She leaves the ring and the two men begin circling Drew.
Drew McIntyre
Don't worry, I'm almost certain you won't get that far anyway.
Drew lightly pats Ziggler on the face before taking a step back and turning around to see that he is surrounded by the three men, Stephanie and Heyman are standing at the bottom of the ramp with evilish grins on their faces. Drew, accepting what's about to happen quickly turns and delivers a hard punch straight to Ziggler knocking him down. Cody grabs Drew from behind and holds his arms down ready for Brock to attack. Brock beats his chest and lets out a high pitch scream before charging towards Drew, however Drew breaks free of Cody and ducks underneath Brock causing Cody to be punched straight in the face by Brock, Cody falls and rolls out of the ring. Brock with a confused look on his face walks over to the ropes and lets out a strange squeaking noise. Heyman screams at Brock to turn around and get Drew but as soon as brock does this Drew sprints towards him and clothslines Brock over the top rope to the hard floor below. Drew looks down on the two men on the floor before smiling and looking up at Stephanie. He says two words which can only just be heard over the cheering fans.
Drew McIntyre
I'm Back!
Drew then turns to see Ziggler scrambling back to his feet. Without hesitation Drew darts forward and delivers a Codebreaker to Dolph. He stands and does his signature taunt once again hyping up the crowd. Ziggler rolls over to the ropes and is lifted up by Brock. Stephanie and her boys begin retreating up the ramp looking back at Drew who is smirking back.
Raw fades out to commercial with a shot of Drew in the ring and a backdrop of cheering fans.
END
((This being my first promo in a while I would love some feedback you all don't mind, thanks))
Suntanners
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Subject: Re: Stephanie opens RAW Thu Oct 17, 2013 2:17 pm
WELCOME BACK WELCOME BACK WELCOME BACK
Twysted
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Subject: Re: Stephanie opens RAW Thu Oct 17, 2013 3:42 pm
I would like to note that it isn't the 'WCF Championship'. No, I take pride in the fact its the Undisputed Championship. GET YOUR SHIT STRAIGHT!
Other than that, a solid promo. Some reason, Drew, despite me not liking him and finding him rather dull, I can actually picture his voice here and I'm actually entertained. Glad to see you back in the mix up and People Power getting another faithful
JOHNmicheals_CMpunk
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Subject: Re: Stephanie opens RAW Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:41 pm
same old 5 star shit man , you already know you promo with the best of um, twysted is right whenever i read a drew promo i hear it in the scottish rouge accent lol. thanks for the minor face push too any little bit sells it over lol
Alveuss
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Subject: Re: Stephanie opens RAW Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:57 pm