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Subject: Mrs. Foley's Baby Boy Tue Nov 12, 2013 9:49 am
King: Well JR, I'd be lying if I said I didn't enjoy recent events here on WCF.
JR: I share the same opinion, King. What with all the rivalries and such, it's not hard not to. Tonight, however, I've heard that we're getting a... special new roster member.
King: Whoever he is, he's going to have to make a damn good entrance if he wants to make an impact in the WC-
[The entire crowd explodes into cheers as Mick Foley, the Hardcore Legend, walks onto the main stage. He's carrying a barbwire wrapped Baseball bat. With a grin on his face, he makes his way down the ramp, high-fiving people along the way. Smacking his bat on the turnbuckle, Foley quickly enters the ring, setting it in the same corner as he stands in the middle of the ring, motioning for a microphone. JR and King don't have much time to talk.]
JR: By God, It's Mick Foley! Mrs. Foley's baby boy has made his way into the WCF!
King: Wow! The fans are eating it up, JR!
[It takes Foley three tries to talk, cheers drowning him out each time. He waits, chuckling, for them to finish before continuing.]
Foley: You know... when my wife told me about the offer to join the WCF, I was a little... shocked at first. I remember.... I remeber asking myself, "why me? Of all the talent available in the world, why me?" And then, I look around. I look around... at all the talent we have. And then I realize it. There's no one as hardcore as I am. Yes, it's true. Sure we have the one, the only Hulk Hogan with his leg drops. We have the Macho Man with his Elbow drops. We have Brodus Clay with... whatever it is he does. But we don't have someone who has put there body on the line as I have. Nobody who was sent off the side of a cage by the Deadman himself. No one who can look at a bag of thumbtacks and go "Oh THERE'S my work stuff!" When I said my final goodbyes to the WWE after my dear old doc told me I couldn't wrestle anymore, I became a Comedian, and an author. Well, I was an author beforehand, but you get the idea. [He scratches his head.] You know... I remember my Wife trying to convince me not to do this. She tried and tried, memories of... everything in all my years of wrestling coming back. But I suppose you can't keep me away from the fans, from the ring... from extreme. I've brought entertainment to millions across the globe... as Cactus Jack...
[The Titantron flashes the images as he says his alter egos
Foley: As Dude Love...
Foley: And... as Mankind...
Foley: So, for those of you who don't know me... I am Mick Foley, the Hardcore Legend.... and for those who do know me... I'm your worst nightmare...
[The music hits again as Foley grabs his baseball bat and exists the ring, dropping the mic on the padded concrete.]
[CLOSED PROMO. FIRST ONE SO PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!]
iB u n k a
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Subject: Re: Mrs. Foley's Baby Boy Tue Nov 12, 2013 9:54 am
I love it. Great for your first promo, I hope we see you stay here a long time and bring WCF a good Mick Foley that we deserve!
MercilessEarth
Posts : 225 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2013-11-07 Age : 34 Location : Alberta, Canada
Subject: Re: Mrs. Foley's Baby Boy Tue Nov 12, 2013 9:57 am
really great introduction to the Foley character and a couple nice callouts to other superstars in WCF. Well done
Sigma Manatee
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Subject: Re: Mrs. Foley's Baby Boy Tue Nov 12, 2013 10:19 am
Very nice! I read this whole thing in Foley's voice which is always the sign of a good promo. Excited to see what you do with it.
