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PostSubject: Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA!   Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA! EmptyTue Jul 09, 2013 4:34 am



"Ladies and Gentlemen, this match is scheduled for one fall! Introducing first, from Long Island New York, Mankind!"

The deranged character known as Mankind comes stumbling out onto stage. His heads snaps around to his surroundings, eyes searching frantically as he walks down the ramp. Some of the fans try to reach out to him only for him to ignore them and continue to the ring. As he reaches the apron, not wasting time, he slides into the ring. He pulls himself over to the corner and sits cross legged, rocking back and forth. The lights dim out fully and the titantron comes to life to reveal Mankind's partner.

The camera shoots back to the forest again. But it's almost as a replay of the last time.

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The humming of a girl sounds out, echoing through the woods as the camera spins around, searching the foggy gloom. Within a few seconds, it finds what it's looking for. The source of the humming. The same girl from last time, in a tattered night gown, beginning to sing.

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"Baa, baa, black sheep, have you any wool?"

She then begins howl with a cackling laughter. The screen spins and suddenly, the girl is dead in front of the camera. She speaks low and quickly, eyes darting from left to right before staring right into the camera.

"The darkness at the end of the hallway. The hooded figure in your dreams. The shadow at the end of the street, staring at your house. The fuel for your nightmares. It's him. The one who is coming. He is the....."

She stops suddenly, eyes widening. Then she whispers to the camera.

"Hide."

Just like last time, the camera shoots to the bushes, watching the girl. A figure slides up behind her as she scream and has her head tilted back by the figure. The figure leans over and slides a hand over the girls face as she goes limp and falls to the ground. The figure then snaps his head over to the camera in the bushes as the camera man begins to back away. As it spins away in an attempt to run, the hooded figure is there. A hand shoots forward and connects with the camera, killing it. Darkness covers the screen as the girls voice sounds out again.

"The fuel for your nightmares. It's him. The one who is coming."

Then words get etched across the screen as though being scratched in.

The tag title tournament. Your nightmares come to life.

Then the laughter of a man sounds out, piercing the quietness of the video so far with a laugh that loud.

However, the screen begins to flash with static. It shoots back to the hooded man. It stares into the camera without being able to be seen. Then suddenly, a flash light flickers onto it. It dies. Again and again it flickers onto it. Then, it stays. It illuminates a red, black, and yellow face painted man. The crowd screams with delight and horror as he speaks the infamous catchphrase of his and his theme begins to play!



Red smoke begins to bellow from the entry way as the Boogeyman can be seen crawling through it. He reaches the ramp and stands up slowly. He stares out at the stage, one hand on his staff and the other on his clock. He smiles wickedly and smacks himself upside the head with the clock! Behind him, fire explodes and he begins to practically spaz out down the ramp, making his way to the ring in an attempt to go after the tag team titles.

[END PROMO, READY TO BE GRADED]
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PostSubject: Re: Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA!   Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA! EmptyTue Jul 09, 2013 4:43 am

Are you sure you want to close this already? There is much more that could be added based on your tag match.
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PostSubject: Re: Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA!   Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA! EmptyTue Jul 09, 2013 1:50 pm

Fair enough. Not closed. Changed the post.
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PostSubject: Re: Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA!   Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA! EmptyThu Jul 11, 2013 10:34 am

The bell rings at the end of the match with the "Dirty Heels" standing over Mankind. They both begin to taunt having been through quite the battle. Bobby, having met Mr. Socko earlier in the match, appears to still be upset over this. He walks over to the fallen Mankind and begins to stomp on him. Aries begins to join in as Roode begins to trash talk Mankind. Behind them, Boogeyman slides into the ring. Almost as if they knew, the two both turn around slowly to see The Boogeyman with a sickening smile, spaz out at them. Roode takes off running at Boogeyman, expecting to catch him off guard. Instead, Boogeyman ducks a clothesline from Roode and Bobby runs into the corner. He turns around, and Boogeyman runs, jumping onto him with the "Boogeyman Splash." Aries goes to rush the Boogeyman but is tripped by the beaten Mankind. Aries turns around, kicking Mankind in the face but Foley doesn't break his hold on Austin's foot. As this is happening, Boogeyman crawls over to the corner in which he placed his staff and his necklace. He smiles evilly as he raises his pouch/necklace above his head and spazes out again. He walks over to where Roode lays, taken down by the splash and stands over him. He reaches down into the pouch to find a handful of worms. He begins to laugh as he slurps one up from the palm of his hand and then holds them out, as though he is going to drop them all over Bobby's face!

Just as it seems he is about to drop them, Boogeyman is knocked through one of the gaps in the ropes. Boogeyman rolls over, looking up to see Aries in the ring, picking up his partner and barreling out of the ring on the opposite side. Boogeyman tries to chase them as the duo hops the barricade and rush through the crowd. Boogeyman stands at the barricade, looking proud of himself as Mankind stumbles over next to him. The very strange duo stare down the dirty "Dirty Heels" as Boogeyman slurps on a few of his worms and the camera cuts to commercial.
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PostSubject: Re: Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA!   Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA! EmptyThu Jul 11, 2013 11:12 am

[Promo now closed and ready to be graded. Razz]
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PostSubject: Re: Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA!   Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA! EmptySun Jul 14, 2013 1:36 am

Boogeyman:

At least there was slightly more to it this time... I don't know, you've had the basically the same promo for a third straight week now and it's now becoming boring to read. To be perfectly honest if all you had again this week was that same promo then you'd be getting nothing more than a 0.5, but since you did at least add a little more onto this it'll be higher. No spoken text, no commentary, no pictures, I really don't know what you're wanting to come from this as it seems that you're putting in 0% effort whatsoever. PLEASE, read over what you've written when you're finished and if you aren't happy with it or you think something is missing then don't post it because odds are the one grading it won't be happy either. I really do want to like your promos but you aren't making it easy. +2Sp
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PostSubject: Re: Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA!   Tag Titles: I'M COMIN' TO GETCHA! EmptyTue Jul 16, 2013 3:23 am

Ouch. I am just going with getting some points. I will start doing other promos that will have me talking and what not. This was just a filler as were the others. Smile
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