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| Subject: Damien Sandow speaks to the masses... Thu Jul 25, 2013 10:31 am | |
| *We come back from a Commercial Break on RAW to the commentary desk.*King: We're all in for a treat now. A new guy on the block, who claims to be an Intellectual Savior! Here's the video!*The lights go out and the Titantron lights up with Damien Sandow on-screen.*Damien Sandow: Entertainment within today's society is at an all time low. It appears to be riddled with nonsensical pop culture which has little or no social, moral, or educational qualities. I speak directly to you, so-called "WWF Universe". The people I see in the audience tonight are riddled with laziness, mediocrity and complacency. Do I blame you for these disgusting attributes? I do not. Saving you...that is the essence of my true colour.*The crowd in the arena witnessing this erupt into boos.*Damien Sandow: Education...Enlightenment...Sophistication...just a mere few words the describe one's Persona. The most important word...Salvation. I am your Salvation. As a matter of fact, I am your Intellectual Savior...Of The Masses. I must profess, I am not here just to preach to you people, but I am here to back this up. I advise the masses to watch Smackdown! on Thursday Night, when I teach these ignoramuses a lesson.(Raises Voice)YOU SHALL BE EDUCATED!*The Crowd once again erupt into boos once more.*Damien Sandow: You're Welcome.*The vignette ends and we come back to the commentary desk.*J.R: Damien Sandow is set to make his debut on Smackdown this week in a Hell In A Cell Fatal 4 Way, taking on Drew McIntyre, Cody Rhodes & Sin Cara.King: That's right! I hope we get to see him here on RAW next week too!(Debut Promo Ready To Be Graded - Didn't want to throw out amazing quality Promos as Sandow. I don't want to concentrate too much with him, I want to kind of have just another guy to play as. I'll still make Promos with him, just not too regularly). |
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| Subject: Re: Damien Sandow speaks to the masses... Fri Jul 26, 2013 5:40 am | |
| Not much to say here. It hits all the right notes for a Sandow promo and of course your editing is spot on. You're obviously a great promo-er and will do great with Sandow but as you yourself point out this was never supposed to be a classic promo. - +3SP[promo], +1SP[debut] | |
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