The promo starts in the middle of Monday Night Raw before Ryback's planned match with Dean Ambrose
Paul Heyman and Ryback stand on the top of the stage, Heyman as usual with a menacing smirk on his face as he prepares to introduce himself.
Paul Heyman: Ladies and Gentleman, my name is Paul Heyman representing my client Ryback. We told you all last week that it would begin. "What would begin?" I hear you numbskulls say. The Ryback Revolution! After my client demolished Big E Langston last week, we have come her tonight with a mission. Actually not a mission. A demand. After my client goes through Dean Ambrose like Chelsea go through managers...
The crowd boos at this insult to their beloved soccer team (I assumed the show was in London)
Paul Heyman: As I was saying, once my client finishes off Dean Ambrose we want a match with a true star. We want a match... with the US Champion Cody Rhodes! Unless of course, Cody knows he can't defeat the human wrecking ball that is... Ryback!
Paul Heyman passes over the mic to Ryback.
Ryback: Feed Me More! Feed Me More! Feed Me More! FEED ME AMBROSE!!!
With that Ryback makes his way to the ring.
Open to Cody Rhodes
Any feedback would be much appreciated
NathanvII
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Subject: Re: We told you so! Fri Nov 15, 2013 8:38 am
Nice promo, I'm just confused, I thought Paul Heyman was with Brock? We have two paul Heyman guys? Anyways, nice promo, more length and pictures and you've nailed it
DJ
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Subject: Re: We told you so! Fri Nov 15, 2013 5:46 pm
A while later in the show, a backstage reporter tracks down Cody to ask him about Ryback's request for a match. Cody smiles as the reporting shoves a mic in his face.
Cody
Yeah, I saw the challenge Ryback issued to myself earlier in the night. And to be honest, I was flattered! He's right, there's no good competition around here these days. I'm actually getting bored! At this rate, I'll be holding the United States Championship for the rest of my career! What do you think, Stone Cold will take it away from me? Ha ha! Please, Stone Cold couldn't take candy away from a baby. I like this Ryback guy, I really do. So I will humbly accept his offer to a match. And we'll have it on this week's SmackDown! Huh, some actual competition, imagine that!
Cody smiles, looking directly into the camera and winking.
Cody
I'll catch you later, I've got a match to get to.
With that, Cody turns and walks off down the hall, the camera watching as he fades into the distance.
(Promo closed.)
The Beast
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Subject: Re: We told you so! Sun Nov 17, 2013 4:44 am
This sound like I am being a dick here but what ever I am not trying to be just saying my honest oppinion...
A short sentance to sum my oppinion up good if you were a jobber and not the United States Champion....
Twysted
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Subject: Re: We told you so! Sun Nov 17, 2013 4:55 am
Its a promo, more than what most of us are doing. Considering Dashing has been putting out at least 3 promos a week, not much can really be said about it
DJ
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Subject: Re: We told you so! Sun Nov 17, 2013 5:08 am
