Stings Debut promo

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Ladys and gentleman the long wait is over i am here and i am ready to take over there are many people in this industry who like to talk the talk but cant walk the walk. I am the man who will change that and the man who will give you his all every single match. So are you ready? Picture cuts out and you see a scorpian and a crow and hear a little girls voice say "This is Sting"

Hey man, this isn't bad but it's short and it lacks color. Maybe increase the length and add a few photos along with color to your text. Take a look at some of the other promos and use them as an example.

Ok ill fix it in one sec thanks