hbk debut promo

j.r:welcome everyone to Monday night rawwwww tonight we will have a great matches ant the main event will be great and…
Suddenly music is sound the crowd going crazy

j.r:my god my god king I cant belive this we heard about this man so much I cant belive it king that’s hbk
jerry lawler: omg can it be
Suddenly on the stage shawn Michaels is going to the ring he take microphone….
The crowd is chanting hbk hbk hbk
Shawn Michaels: welcome every one that came here on new York I came here to tell you one thing on new York I came to raw to fight ok I didn’t came here to be a man that will fight and will entertained you and I will  be one of the best there is in this business so anyone that think he can beat me just come right now to the ring and I will show you my first ever debut on Monday night rawwww  
Suddenly tensai music is sound tensai is on the stage with microphone and saying you want a match here is a match
Tensai is enter the ring and hbk giving him the sweet chin music the crowd goes crazy and Shawn Michaels goes out of the ring and the crowd still chanting hbk hbk hbk
j.r:this is going to be a new era because this man shawn Michaels.

Unfortunately, we don't have a Tensai in the federation, so you kind of...can't attack somebody who isn't there.

It's an alright start for a new character, but you might want to take a look at other people's Promos before you write your next one. This was incredibly short, and took me a little over a minute to read.