The Return of the Taker

*The arena darkens and the crowd cheers in delight as they knew this could only be the phenom, the man from the darkside was returning and nothing was going to stop it now after months of ghostly rumors and whispers. A few moments pass, the faint light of torches could be seen as the druids slowly walked out of entrance way and lined up along the ramp, holding up their torches high. The bizarre symbol of the Ministry of Darkness could barely be seen hanging just in front the titantron now, placed there for some dark sinister purpose.



*Then a lighting bolt flashes and crackles from high above, hitting the symbol and lighting it on fire! The creatures of the night howl with approval, ready to feed on the flesh the Undertaker would soon provide for them and offer the tormented soul of his first victim to the Higher Power that controlled his destiny.*





Finally, all bore witness to the rebirth of the Lord of Darkness as he made his way down to the ring, walking methodically through the fog that now filled the arena. You could feel an icy chill crawl over your shivering body, seeing the legend make his return after a long absence and now with a dark an evil agenda. As The Undertaker gave the arena back it's light, long time followers knew that this was a side of the phenom that they had not seen in a long while and some loved the chaos that would soon follow upon his return to the forces of evil.

[PROMO IS CLOSED. COMMENTS WELCOME]

Nice structure and introduction to a character that's been poorly handled. On a personal step, you've used a little more BBCoding and even added a few pictures which was noticeably missing from your Ted DiBiase promos. I hope you can find your edge with Undertaker and give him a career in WCF that he deserves.

I would also recommend doing a bit more to separate your words from actions.

*insert Lesnar's theme here*