Subject: PERFECT Healing (Edited) Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:35 pm
*WWF returns from a commercial*
Michael Cole: "Hello and welcome back to Monday Night Raw! I am Michael Cole, and this is my broadcast partner Jerry "The King" Lawler. Jerry, what do you think is going to go down tonight here on Raw?"
Jerry Lawler: "Well Cole, I think The Legion is going to make a statement to some superstars before Vengeance even starts to get a advantage in matches if they are against them. I really hope they don't!"
Jerry Lawler: Well I hope that doesn't happen either because..."
*Then Curtis Axel's Legion music plays*
"Loyalty... Honor... Glory... THE LEGION!!!
*But when the music continued, Axel never came out of the stage. Instead of him walking out, a video of him appeared on the titantron with the words "via satellite" on it*
*There was a combination of boo's and cheer's for Axel when he came up*
Curtis: "I bet to you guys thought I wasn't the via satellite kind of guy too, like The Rock. But the reason why I'm here at home and not there on Raw, and not with my fellow friends of Legion, is because I recently got injured by Mr. Money in the Swag, John Morrison. Seems like that challenge wasn't enough, he wanted a fight, so I got one. So when I come back healed and ready to fight, I'll win the tag team titles, and kick his ass with his own briefcase."
*The fans started booing him after that response*
Curtis: "In the fight against Morrison, I have seemed to have injure my left arm pretty badly after the match, so it will take about a week to recover and heal in time for me to compete. But you guys don't care about me, do you?"
FANS: "WE WANT AXEL! WE WANT AXEL!!!"
Michael Cole: "Is Axel actually getting good chants? What wizardry is this!?!"
Jerry Lawler: "I have to agree with you Cole, Axel never gets good chants!"
Curtis: "Thank you everyone. I know I will you see again another time. By the way. This is probably the only city I've been that actually cheered me for a change. Oh well, fame won't last forever. . Other than that, when I get better and return to Raw after my injury, I will take the Tag Team Titles away from Bad Influence and beat John Morrison by his won games! Because I am... PERFECT!!!"
*Then Nitro fades into a commercial with the fans chanting "PERFECT"*[/center]
[PROMO DONE AND READY TO BE GRADED]
Last edited by DeathM4rchJones_Curtis on Fri Jul 26, 2013 3:59 am; edited 1 time in total
DJ
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A decent promo here, Axel. You're getting much better, but you're still not doing what I feel you could be doing. You have a good use of commentary in there, and it's good that you addressed all of your opponents for the ppv, but again you could do a lot better. Try working with Dolph and Punk more, you guys do great promos all together.
By the way it's Bash at the Beach, not Vengeance, that doesn't count for anything, it's just weird.